Marriage

“Marriage…a lottery, win it or lose it.”
12/09/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 4:38 AM
And sometimes we do not want to keep the ticket...
U.D Palawon  Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 11:58 AM
:D Ya sure...its a choice...Love your comment. Thanks. :)
Vincent Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 11:12 AM
What a laden line...... one line that's so long and packed.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 12:59 PM
Thanks Vincent for the read and appreciation. Feel so glad you like it. :) Sunita
Turner Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 4:58 PM
At least in a marriage one can sway the odds a little but it's still a turkey shoot! Great analogy, Sunita.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Dommage! Out of love we all do it and any good reason is valid...but the bare truth is, once the charm's broken, it no longer stands!:) Thanks Daniel.
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