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Maria's Stars

All the shine of a thousand stars can't keep me away from you though I know that one day we'll be free and together at last it is hard to believe that your gone like a morning's 1st dawn what am I to do when the stars leave their dew, on you ? When the nights are cold and the stars have lost their glow though the memory of you is as fading as old photographs all these tears that I shed are the tears of a broken soul what am I to do when the stars leave their dew, on you ? If only one night I could lie by your side like I did in old times though I miss you sweet face and can never erase all the love in my heart that was yours from the start what am I to do when the stars leave their dew, on you ? All the shine of a thousand stars can't keep me away from you what am I to do when the stars leave their dew, on you ? will I try to rescind like the wind be a leaf at your door will I sleep on your pillow tonight or ask God for more? All the shine of a thousand stars can't keep me away from you though I know that one day we'll be free and together at last it is hard to believe that your gone like the mornings 1st dawn what am I to do when the stars leave their dew, only on you. Written for Maria Williams voice to follow. ??

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Date: 11/5/2024 11:11:00 PM
Dearest Vie, your poem is a tender and haunting expression of longing and love's enduring presence, even in the face of loss.The imagery of "stars leaving their dew" is both beautiful and poignant, symbolizing memories that linger like morning mist. Your words capture the ache of separation and the quiet hope of eventual reunion. There's a timeless, almost celestial quality to it, as though love itself is woven into the fabric of the night sky. This piece resonates deeply, as it speaks to anyone who has loved and lost, yet holds onto hope like a glimmering star. A fave for sure xxx
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Date: 11/5/2024 5:44:00 AM
Pretty song Vi. I've written a number but I don't think I'll ask her to do anymore for me. She's a busy gal. So sweet though
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Date: 11/5/2024 5:48:00 AM
I know Tom, I am not expecting her to put music to it, I will sing this to her, when I get the time to record it, in my human broken voice, lol, thanks for visiting, be well,

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