Marbles Life

Lines in the marble are its life road map. A hard life, is the marble’s, beautiful soul, when carved.

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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/11/2019 6:56:00 AM

Great comparison between two subjects

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/11/2019 11:02:00 AM

Glad you think so. Thanks so much.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/11/2019 1:37:00 PM

Hi MLK, Greece has marble etched throughout its history, marble in its famous sun dial, marble in the famous Parthenon, marble statues of Greek gods in the museum in Athens - ancient Greek history is drowned in marble - beautiful words MLK that almost seem carved in the marble you write of. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/11/2019 8:58:00 PM

Thanks I've always thought Marble was a lovely stone.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/11/2019 5:17:00 AM

Glorious dearest, MLK!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/11/2019 1:16:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2019 1:44:00 AM

Terrific kimo! I have never felt so close to marble before.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2019 6:09:00 AM

I had to add that we had a marble floor put down once and a marble inset beside a fireplace. Unfortunately, they were both uneven in a short amount of time. So beautiful the first day, but treacherous to walk on with wet feet.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/11/2019 2:11:00 AM

One of the more beautiful rocks...wouldn't you agree? So many wonderful colors and those lines...they take my imagination to so many places, unseen by physical eyes...okay, so it's a rock.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/11/2019 12:58:00 AM

carving heart of marble is beautiful /// nicely written

M. L. Kiser
Date: 3/11/2019 2:13:00 AM

A very beautiful stone I love seeing in old buildings. Thanks.