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"Marbles" losing oneself in the dance is like a game of marbles snookered you shoot the pot corner hole unlit never never give up it soon becomes the win when you lose your marbles you're leagues way ahead when they drop you take the fall there's only one way to go, and that is up twister is not a game it’s not all that you’ve read dance moves on the floor of life all lit up marbles, shooting shots like long legged legends you take your shot you're delerious still laughing like there's no tomorrow dance moves on the floor of life all lit up like legends marbles, loose and lost leagues ahead (LadyLabyrinth / 2023)

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Date: 4/23/2023 10:49:00 AM
Love the piece and the videos, L L. Interesting to note how really attractive Lucille Ball was before she became TV's queen of the sitcom.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/23/2023 4:05:00 PM
lol. touché. it's not the externals, it's what's inside ... that counts.
Date: 4/15/2023 7:34:00 PM
beautiful penning, an original one, thanks
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/15/2023 7:58:00 PM
Thank you. I'm all for "original". :)
Date: 4/15/2023 7:31:00 PM
"Relating to a Psychopath"/Macy Gray.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/15/2023 7:33:00 PM
LYRICS/"Relating to a Psychopath", Macy Gray. https://genius.com/Macy-gray-relating-to-a-psychopath-lyrics
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 4/15/2023 7:31:00 PM
https://youtu.be/4ipeEfIMQLo

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