Many Sad Faces

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

Restoring normality to this topsy-turvy self-quarantined world, vaccines are a true game changer, and like a Phoenix rising from yesterday's ashes, hope morphs into a smile on many sad faces. (Yalto) 03/23/2021 Phoenix Rising Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/25/2021 6:51:00 AM

Such a wonderful Yalto, Emile:-) You're clearly an expert at them. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! GL in Seeker's!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/25/2021 10:03:00 AM

Agreed, my friend:-) It's a narrative verse after all!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/25/2021 7:32:00 AM

Thanks Edward, I really love your form, so much can be communicated with so few words my friend, Emile.

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/24/2021 2:12:00 PM

An excellent piece, Emile! So true today. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/24/2021 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Kim, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.