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Many Miles Away Memories

From the bottom of my heart Though many miles away Your memories... still stay Changing versions of horizons Still, I am singing our song Days and months has gone by To forget you - a hard try From the bottom of my heart Though many miles away Your memories... still stay Seeing different faces My all runaway craze Travelling to many places My air breathing space From the bottom of my heart Though many miles away Your memories... still stay Unforgettable you maybe I'll never be a crybaby Each night, my single pray My dear God, make a way From the bottom of my heart Along these many miles away Your memories soon will gray For someday and somewhere I'll be Someone's one and only leading lady BY: olive_eloi 12:59 am 04/04/2014 CONTEST:MANY MILES AWAY SPONSOR: ROGER HORSCH 1st place

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Date: 12/28/2014 3:09:00 AM
Congrats to you ,dear Olive :) your words and lines are very heartfelt>.. simply the best! ^_^
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/28/2014 10:17:00 AM
thanks much Aiyah.. ;)!
Date: 4/27/2014 7:16:00 AM
A lovely poem. I thought its written for me b'coz I had a very sad farewell frm my school after a journey of 7 years. Best wishes-shaista:)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/27/2014 10:41:00 AM
It is written for all persons who longs for care and love... Thanks much:) God bless you too Shaista..:) , olive
Date: 4/9/2014 10:09:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on Many Miles Away theme, congrats on a fine win,Olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/9/2014 11:59:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by sir... :)
Date: 4/8/2014 1:08:00 AM
Beautifully written Olive.. Congratulations on your first place win... Verlena
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/8/2014 2:44:00 AM
Thanks Verlena. :) To God always the greatest glory... ;)
Date: 4/7/2014 4:03:00 PM
On a high podium today Olive_eloi !!:):) What a worthy win!! Just stopped by to give you merited congratulations. Go girl Go :) :) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/7/2014 4:41:00 PM
Thanks Paul.. :) but always to God be the greatest glory.. :) ____ olive_eloi with sleepy eyes.. :D :P lol
Date: 4/7/2014 9:30:00 AM
Hi Olive, You seem to be on my winners list again. Congrats......Hugs......Roger
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Roger Horsch
Date: 4/7/2014 10:26:00 AM
Amen
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/7/2014 9:43:00 AM
Oh thanks much.. I didn't expect it to be that high.. Thanks much:) to God be greatest glory..
Date: 4/5/2014 1:47:00 AM
A fair ambition, leading lady, a sad fruition, memory fading to gray, but love must move on, however, never forget. The stronger the love, the longer the color remains. This is a great lyric. J.A.B.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/5/2014 6:04:00 AM
Yes it is.. The stronger the love the longer the color remains... However, this can be controlled. :) thanks for dropping by and comment..:) I appreciate it
Date: 4/4/2014 1:22:00 PM
Yes, memories linger on...to fill a void when we feel all alone. // and one day, Olive_eloi, you too will have your special someone...and you will be the only leading lady :) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/4/2014 5:30:00 PM
thanks Paul.. :) Im praying for that :) And I believe in God's perfect timing.. ===olive_eloi
Date: 4/4/2014 9:41:00 AM
a heartfelt song from the heart of Poet... this is one great poem ,Eloi.. :')) gl in the contest!! ^__^
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/5/2014 6:01:00 AM
Thanks aiyah:)to God be the glory

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