Many Miles Away

Many Miles Away

The rumbling thunder said
the rain was many miles away.
The dry fields ached for the
slightest hint of moisture.
Everything that could be done,
had been done, the plowing,
the planting, the weeding,
the irrigation.  Then the rain
had stopped.  The irrigation
ditches dried and cracked,
leaving those dependent upon
them to bake in the unforgiving sun.
Hot, dry wind blew sandy soil
across the exposed roots of
a failing crop, dust limited the
visibility to one’s own situation.
The questions came, as they
always did, echoing from many
miles away, through many
generations, passing through
today.  The whys and why nots.
The curses followed, of the land,
the heat, the drought, the
failing crop.  The prayers came,
passing over dried lips, uttered
by swollen tongues, mumbled in
failing hope.  And still the thunder
rumbled, the water laden clouds
roiled and taunted, the warm
moist wind blew across the
fields, a promise too
many miles away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 10:07 AM
Enjoyed the write on Many Miles Away theme, congrats on a fine win,
Walker  Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 11:24 PM
John, such imagery. Well done and congratulations on your first place win. Verlena
Lawless Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Verlena, thank you for the challenge of the contest. I find the many contests here at PoetrySoup a serious stimulant for the muse. Thank you for your time and tutelage.
A  Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Awesome poem John, Congratulations, a wonderful win. Thank you for sharing how far your distance goes. ~SKAT~
Lawless Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 6:26 AM
Thanks Skat, for reading and commenting. Since I joined Poetrysoup the interaction has awakened the muse.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 9:55 AM
I like this because it''a a real situation experienced by farmers.. I remember my parents praying for rain... Greatly penned.. CONGRATULATIONS!!!-- olive_eloi
Lawless Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 6:28 AM
Olive, thanks for reading and commenting on this poem. The vagaries of the weather are more difficult for those who rely on it for sustenance....hey....that would be all of us.
Horsch Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Congrats John on a wonderful win.......Roger
Lawless Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 6:29 AM
Thanks Roger, Many miles away was a most interesting prompt.
Harrell Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 10:37 PM
I like this. Very captivating. It held my attention to the end :)
Lawless Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Toquyen, glad you enjoyed it. Ii's always nice to hear that the poem maintained the attention of the reader "to the end".
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