Man's Legacy

(form 5-7-5 kawanagi ) astronomical industrialization abomination posted in March, 2018

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Pat Adams

Date: 3/12/2018 4:09:00 PM

Oh man, I was just going to say that!!.......80)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 5:14:00 PM

LOL - it's actually on the tip of a lot of people's tongue.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/12/2018 12:47:00 PM

Yup!! You nailed it! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 1:14:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Gershon.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/12/2018 12:43:00 PM

Wow, is that so true, Line xxoo and it's scary xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 1:13:00 PM

O well - we can continue to try fixing the world with our poetry.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/12/2018 11:16:00 AM

A scar on the landscape but a necessary one. Great hakiu Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 1:14:00 PM

God bless the responsible ones!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/12/2018 11:31:00 AM

There are responsible industrialists' but there are the irresponsible ones that dump their waste in beauty spots and rivers.The polluters' of our environment.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 11:24:00 AM

I was making a stab more at those criminally negligent pollution contributors who know the consequences but don't care. Thanks for your visit and comment, Tom.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/12/2018 9:55:00 AM

Nice Haiku; so different than most but telling.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2018 10:44:00 AM

Maybe not one of my most cheerful! Line xx