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~ Nana's sourdough, warm - Heaven's hearth ... the yeast ... of Eden ~ Written on October 11, 2018 * The "LUNE", (a Haiku-like poetic form consisting of a three-line, 5-3-5 syllable count), is also known as "American Haiku" ... it was first created by the poet Robert Kelly, and was a result of Kelly’s frustration with English haiku. *

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Date: 10/20/2018 1:38:00 AM
That is simply wow. I really like your haiku. Mana from Nana, great. Kai
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 2:00:00 AM
Many thanks to you, Kai - blessings, my good friend! :-)
Date: 10/16/2018 9:08:00 AM
This is one of the best winning entries, Greg! Congratulations on placing high! Regards // paul
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 2:00:00 AM
This is very kind of you to say, Paul, and I greatly appreciate it, Friend! :-)
Date: 10/14/2018 2:51:00 PM
WE thought alike, Greg. (manna) Congrats to you. Loved that last line.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea, I will have to read yours, (and all the others) ... if I ever find a moment. Ugh! ;-)
Date: 10/14/2018 2:15:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:59:00 AM
That's very kind, Line, thank you! :-)
Date: 10/14/2018 10:36:00 AM
congratulations on your win :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:58:00 AM
Thank you, Eve! :-)
Date: 10/13/2018 5:00:00 PM
mmmm. I'm suddenly hungry.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2018 1:58:00 AM
That's a good sign, Becca - thank you! :-) <3
Date: 10/12/2018 8:43:00 AM
Lovely, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/13/2018 4:12:00 PM
Thank you, Line! :-)
Date: 10/11/2018 11:16:00 PM
The heavenly food, came on them, loathsome became trump. //// nice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/13/2018 4:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Mahtab! :-)

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