Gregory Richard Barden Poet Haiku

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Manna From Nana

~     Nana's sourdough, warm -


     Heaven's hearth ...


                         the yeast ... of Eden     ~





Written on October 11, 2018

* The "LUNE", (a Haiku-like poetic form consisting of a three-line, 5-3-5 syllable count), is also known as "American Haiku" ... it was first created by the poet Robert Kelly, and was a result of Kelly’s frustration with English haiku. *

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Kai Michael Neumann October 20, 2018 at 1:38 AM That is simply wow. I really like your haiku. Mana from Nana, great. Kai Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 2:00 AM Many thanks to you, Kai - blessings, my good friend! :-)

Paul Callus October 16, 2018 at 9:08 AM This is one of the best winning entries, Greg! Congratulations on placing high! Regards // paul Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 2:00 AM This is very kind of you to say, Paul, and I greatly appreciate it, Friend! :-)

Andrea Dietrich October 14, 2018 at 2:51 PM WE thought alike, Greg. (manna) Congrats to you. Loved that last line. Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 1:59 AM Thank you very much, Andrea, I will have to read yours, (and all the others) ... if I ever find a moment. Ugh! ;-)

Line Gauthier October 14, 2018 at 2:15 PM Back with well deserved congrats on your win, Gregory. Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 1:59 AM That's very kind, Line, thank you! :-)

Eve Roper October 14, 2018 at 10:36 AM congratulations on your win :) Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 1:58 AM Thank you, Eve! :-)

Becca Teagan October 13, 2018 at 5:00 PM mmmm. I'm suddenly hungry. Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 1:58 AM That's a good sign, Becca - thank you! :-) <3

Line Gauthier October 12, 2018 at 8:43 AM Lovely, Gregory. Gregory Richard Barden October 13, 2018 at 4:12 PM Thank you, Line! :-)

Mahtab Bangalee October 11, 2018 at 11:16 PM The heavenly food, came on them, loathsome became trump. //// nice Gregory Richard Barden October 13, 2018 at 4:11 PM Thanks so much, Mahtab! :-)