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Manna From Heaven

manna from heaven cloudburst after a long drought... earth quenches its thirst Submitted for... HI-KU(2) Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date: 12/15/2020 Date written: 08/04/2020

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Date: 12/17/2020 3:58:00 PM
lovely lines Edward, many congrats :-) hugs jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/17/2020 4:08:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise:-)
Date: 12/17/2020 9:34:00 AM
Ah, this is so beautifully expressed, Edward. I can feel the relief and satisfaction of your last line. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/17/2020 9:55:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan:-) Your visit and feedback means a great deal! Happy holidays!
Date: 12/16/2020 3:15:00 PM
Lovely one, Edward. VEry well done!! Congrats.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/16/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 12/16/2020 11:26:00 AM
Love the second line Edward and the metaphor of manna as "earth quenches it thirst." Congratulations on your win! All the best.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/16/2020 11:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sam:-) I'm glad you liked this! Happy holidays!
Date: 8/6/2020 8:23:00 AM
Rain is amazing. I love it and love writing poetry which it inspires me to. God bless you with many more wonderful writes.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/16/2020 11:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Regina:-) Sorry about the delay in reply!
Date: 8/4/2020 9:47:00 PM
Enjoyed the Rains. All the best.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/5/2020 3:36:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha:-)

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