Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Mankinds Trust

Spanning across the 
nighttime skies 
Floating up with the 
wistful sighs
Sparkling moonbeams 
will softly hint 
As star lite twinkling 
smiles imprint 
Stardust covers 
planets with zeal
Kissing planets with 
a sweet appeal 
Time stands still in 
the atmosphere 
Admitting gentle waves 
so cavalier 
Caressing another soothing 
their soul
Through the dimensions 
as they scroll
Hushed whispers of how 
all the world's unjust 
Can ultimately transform 
into mankind's trust

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Gideon Idudje April 29, 2020 at 5:37 PM Interesting and beautiful What a galaxy your pen is Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:55 AM Gideon thank you do much!;) I do appreciate it!;)

Eve Roper April 28, 2020 at 8:34 PM The universe, so much to devour with intriguing color. A great big canvas to just stand on your toes, reach as high as you can, and just grasp a moment to savor. Beautiful write my lady. I hope your well? It's been a while I see you've written. If you’re not big prayers direct to the Big Guy that painted your poem to look like you described. Hugs Eve Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:55 AM Eve it's always a pleasure to see read your comments! Thank you so much!;)

Gordon Mcconnell April 21, 2020 at 3:25 PM Lovely piece Brenda so well penned with good imagery and nice rhyme. Keep safe and take care, Gordon Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:54 AM Gordon thank you for your continuous support!;)

Ann Gilmour April 17, 2020 at 5:38 PM Many congrats dear Brenda for your beautiful win! With kindest thoughts Ann xx Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:54 AM Ann much appreciated thank you!;)

Paul Callus April 17, 2020 at 9:44 AM This poem transmits a sense of peace and serenity, Brenda. Love the ending, too. Congratulations...pleased to be sharing top spot with you:) ~ Warm regards // paul Brenda Chiri April 30, 2020 at 7:53 AM Paul thank you so much!;)

John Watt April 16, 2020 at 11:57 PM Such beautiful imagery, rhyme, and flow in your poem, Brenda. Uplifting message too. A well-deserved #1, congrats! Brenda Chiri April 17, 2020 at 1:50 AM John thank you for your continued support of my work!;)

Winged Warrior April 11, 2020 at 10:39 AM A trustful worthy write dear sissy...hope your keeping safe...all my love and Happy Easter (Buona Pasqua)...best wishes from bro bro :o) Brenda Chiri April 17, 2020 at 1:49 AM Bro bro thank you for your visit my dear brother! ;)

John Fleming April 10, 2020 at 10:55 AM Heroic Couplets -- and heroic indeed! Very grand, Poetess -- enjoyed! :) john P.s Alexander Pope would have approved, methinks. Brenda Chiri April 17, 2020 at 1:48 AM As always John I love your reads! Sorry I haven't been on fb of late but will try make time todo that! Thank you!;)

Subimal Sinha-Roy April 10, 2020 at 7:16 AM Nicely flowing verse. We all wait for that time. Take care. Brenda Chiri April 17, 2020 at 1:47 AM Subimal thank you my friend!;)