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Mankinds Trust

Spanning across the nighttime skies Floating up with the wistful sighs Sparkling moonbeams will softly hint As star lite twinkling smiles imprint Stardust covers planets with zeal Kissing planets with a sweet appeal Time stands still in the atmosphere Admitting gentle waves so cavalier Caressing another soothing their soul Through the dimensions as they scroll Hushed whispers of how all the world's unjust Can ultimately transform into mankind's trust

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 4/29/2020 5:37:00 PM
Interesting and beautiful What a galaxy your pen is
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/30/2020 7:55:00 AM
Gideon thank you do much!;) I do appreciate it!;)
Date: 4/28/2020 8:34:00 PM
The universe, so much to devour with intriguing color. A great big canvas to just stand on your toes, reach as high as you can, and just grasp a moment to savor. Beautiful write my lady. I hope your well? It's been a while I see you've written. If you’re not big prayers direct to the Big Guy that painted your poem to look like you described. Hugs Eve
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/30/2020 7:55:00 AM
Eve it's always a pleasure to see read your comments! Thank you so much!;)
Date: 4/21/2020 3:25:00 PM
Lovely piece Brenda so well penned with good imagery and nice rhyme. Keep safe and take care, Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/30/2020 7:54:00 AM
Gordon thank you for your continuous support!;)
Date: 4/17/2020 5:38:00 PM
Many congrats dear Brenda for your beautiful win! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/30/2020 7:54:00 AM
Ann much appreciated thank you!;)
Date: 4/17/2020 9:44:00 AM
This poem transmits a sense of peace and serenity, Brenda. Love the ending, too. Congratulations...pleased to be sharing top spot with you:) ~ Warm regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/30/2020 7:53:00 AM
Paul thank you so much!;)
Date: 4/16/2020 11:57:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, rhyme, and flow in your poem, Brenda. Uplifting message too. A well-deserved #1, congrats!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/17/2020 1:50:00 AM
John thank you for your continued support of my work!;)
Date: 4/11/2020 10:39:00 AM
A trustful worthy write dear sissy...hope your keeping safe...all my love and Happy Easter (Buona Pasqua)...best wishes from bro bro :o)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/17/2020 1:49:00 AM
Bro bro thank you for your visit my dear brother! ;)
Date: 4/10/2020 10:55:00 AM
Heroic Couplets -- and heroic indeed! Very grand, Poetess -- enjoyed! :) john P.s Alexander Pope would have approved, methinks.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/17/2020 1:48:00 AM
As always John I love your reads! Sorry I haven't been on fb of late but will try make time todo that! Thank you!;)
Date: 4/10/2020 7:16:00 AM
Nicely flowing verse. We all wait for that time. Take care.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/17/2020 1:47:00 AM
Subimal thank you my friend!;)

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