Manifestation

a rock is a rock because it thinks it's so
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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Hello David Byrne, the rock thinks it is a rock, becayse it is a a rock. Enjoy your day my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Metaphorically or material? Enjoyed this thought. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Smith Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Alas...
Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 8:04 PM
Thought provoking.
Doll Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 10:39 AM
David, very clever write. Also, at the atomic level, the rock can't deny it's a rock. Enjoyed this very much. Best Wishes~ Warren
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 10:16 AM
Enjoyed!
Wolf Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 8:55 AM
Fair enough! … Which brings us to this: A rock is a rock is a rock. ~ GSW (Gershon Shmuel Wolf / aka Gertrude Stein Wolf). Nice monoku, David! Best wishes, Gershon
Kiser Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 2:51 PM
Oh, I like this Monoku; well done.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 11, 2019 at 3:51 AM
We are magical, this world is also, and as an avid rock collector since age two, I concur with this in every way; energy forms herself based on her belief system.
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