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MANIFESTATION

a rock is a rock because it thinks it's so

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/27/2019 9:31:00 AM
Alas...
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Date: 1/26/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thought provoking.
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Date: 1/25/2019 10:39:00 AM
David, very clever write. Also, at the atomic level, the rock can't deny it's a rock. Enjoyed this very much. Best Wishes~ Warren
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Date: 1/24/2019 10:16:00 AM
Enjoyed!
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Date: 1/24/2019 8:55:00 AM
Fair enough! … Which brings us to this: A rock is a rock is a rock. ~ GSW (Gershon Shmuel Wolf / aka Gertrude Stein Wolf). Nice monoku, David! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 1/13/2019 2:51:00 PM
Oh, I like this Monoku; well done.
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Date: 1/11/2019 3:51:00 AM
We are magical, this world is also, and as an avid rock collector since age two, I concur with this in every way; energy forms herself based on her belief system.
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