Manifest Visibility

sweet Kissimmee sun... carefree hands on steering wheel ...soft marshmallow clouds 3/14/2019
*Kissimmee - city in Florida
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Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 7:16 PM
Love the feeling this evokes!!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, Andrea!!
Roper Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Great imagery , Kim... I'm driving enjoying the view . Hugs Eve ~`*
Rodrigues Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Yay!
Horne Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 10:24 AM
what a lovely happy haiku
Rodrigues Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, Jack!
Gentile Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 6:34 AM
Love this one Kim!! such a lovely thought Happy Friday xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 6:41 AM
Thank you, Mike! Happy Friday!
Michael Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 12:16 AM
A picture of peace...well expressed Kim...
Rodrigues Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 6:41 AM
Thank you, Arturo!
Wolf Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 10:49 AM
Thanks for taking me to Kissimmee for a magical moment, Kim. Very nice Haiku!! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 8:54 AM
oh how delightful Kim I've been to Kissimmee on two holidays! Love that final line:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Thank you, Jan :)
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