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Man Samarpit, Tan Samarpit

Man samarpit, tan samarpit Aur yah jeevan samarpit Chaahtaa hoon desh ki dharti tujhey kuchh aur bhi doon Ma tumhara rin bahut hai, mai akinchan Kintu itna kar raha phir bhi nivedan Thaal mein laoo saja kar bhaal jab bhi Kar daya sweekar lena wah samarpan Gaan arpit, Praan arpit Raqt ka kan kan samarpit Chaahtaa hoon desh ki dharti tujhey kuchh aur bhi doon Maanj do talwaar, lao na deri Bandh do kas kar kamar par dhaal meri Bhaal par mal do charan ki dhool thodi Sheesh par asheesh ki chhaya ghaneri Swapn arpit, prashn arpit Aayu ka kshan kshan samarpit Chaahtaa hoon desh ki dharti tujhey kuchh aur bhi doon Todta hoon moh ka bandhan, kshama do Gaon mere, dwar, ghar, aangan kshama do Aaj seedhe haath mein talwaar de do Aur bayeen haath mein dhwaj ko thama do Yah suman lo, yah chaman lo Need ka tran tran samarpit Chaahtaa hoon desh ki dharti tujhey kuchh aur bhi doon Poet of this Poem is Shri Ramavtar Tyagi

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Date: 6/15/2010 4:52:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sandesh. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2010 10:06:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family...enjoyed your creative write... questions abound indeed... its finding the answers tis the challenge in life ..with luv from the "Sweetheart" ????????????????????
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:07:00 AM
Hey, I like the coded message. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/13/2010 3:53:00 AM
Who will interpret it?Sandesh
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