Get Your Premium Membership

Man Samarpit, Tan Samarpit

Man samarpit, tan samarpit
Aur yah jeevan samarpit
Chaahtaa hoon desh ki dharti tujhey kuchh aur bhi doon

Ma tumhara rin bahut hai, mai akinchan
Kintu itna kar raha phir bhi nivedan
Thaal mein laoo saja kar bhaal jab bhi
Kar daya sweekar lena wah samarpan

Gaan arpit, Praan arpit
Raqt ka kan kan samarpit
Chaahtaa hoon desh ki dharti tujhey kuchh aur bhi doon

Maanj do talwaar, lao na deri
Bandh do kas kar kamar par dhaal meri
Bhaal par mal do charan ki dhool thodi
Sheesh par asheesh ki chhaya ghaneri

Swapn arpit, prashn arpit
Aayu ka kshan kshan samarpit
Chaahtaa hoon desh ki dharti tujhey kuchh aur bhi doon

Todta hoon moh ka bandhan, kshama do
Gaon mere, dwar, ghar, aangan kshama do
Aaj seedhe haath mein talwaar de do
Aur bayeen haath mein dhwaj ko thama do

Yah suman lo, yah chaman lo
Need ka tran tran samarpit
Chaahtaa hoon desh ki dharti tujhey kuchh aur bhi doon

Poet of this Poem is Shri Ramavtar Tyagi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/15/2010 4:52:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sandesh. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2010 10:06:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family...enjoyed your creative write... questions abound indeed... its finding the answers tis the challenge in life ..with luv from the "Sweetheart" ????????????????????
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2010 8:07:00 AM
Hey, I like the coded message. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
Login to Reply
Date: 6/13/2010 3:53:00 AM
Who will interpret it?Sandesh
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry