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Man of the World

Man of the world: His eyes were the trick to his disguise His lies were the key to his guide As he lay there deep with in the lie He realized Nor he nor anyone else could relinquish him of the pain he'd hide Of the pain he'd hide So if he fell astray If he fell behind No one would be left to help him fly -Written By Jesse Gillibrand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/28/2016 9:09:00 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
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Date: 1/19/2016 9:41:00 PM
Jesse WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Jesse Gillibrand
Date: 1/19/2016 9:47:00 PM
Thanks Linda ! Wish I knew how to edit I accidentally screwed up the poem and enjoying the site it's fun !
Date: 1/19/2016 6:43:00 PM
Jesse,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Jesse Gillibrand
Date: 1/19/2016 9:40:00 PM
Thank you I really appreciate it and I would like that !

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