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Man Donned In Yellow

man donned in yellow rain slicker dripping wet knocked.... two pomegrantes sweet husband bearing gifts of the pomegrante... one large, one small fruit three pomegrante bushes only fruit bearing... remembers just me

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2014 6:07:00 PM

wonderful string of haiku many congrats:-) Hugs Jan x

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2014 2:33:00 PM

Hi Sara, congratulations on your win for this sweet Haiku! A perfect image of love. Hugs, Sandra

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/27/2014 12:14:00 PM

congratulations Sara for this fine win

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/27/2014 9:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/27/2014 12:42:00 AM

SARA, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Sorry, it took this long to post the winning poems. Stop by my latest blog "A Woman's Gift" if you'd like. Enjoy life and the Holidays. :) Always ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/4/2013 5:59:00 PM

soupmail, right away!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/3/2013 10:32:00 PM

Beautiful Sara.... you sure know how to paint such a beautiful canvas.... love LINDA

Jack Horne

Date: 11/3/2013 10:16:00 AM

what a lovely write, my friend. That's quite exotic fruit over here

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/3/2013 6:57:00 AM

- Simply amazing, Sara !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/2/2013 3:31:00 PM

Enriching memory you share here Sara, So plesent a read; Joe..)

Donna Jones

Date: 11/2/2013 12:20:00 PM

These were wonderful Sara....:-) :-) :-) Such a distinct picture....

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/2/2013 11:17:00 AM

great haiku.wonderful Sara. (: )Jenish.

Sandra Adams

Date: 11/1/2013 9:07:00 PM

I love how you crafted these haiku together...I could see him standing in the rain picking them in his yellow slicker...proudly bearing gifts for you...great work!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/1/2013 8:05:00 PM

Three wonderful Haiku that you have written here my friend! I surely enjoyed reading these delightful poems this evening! What harmonious pieces you have written here, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2013 6:19:00 PM

sorry, I went back and reread it and did not reread the second one to catch that!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/1/2013 6:23:00 PM

That was okay for we sometimes don't read too closely just skim unless something catches our attention then we will read again..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2013 6:05:00 PM

these were interesting to see. Who was this man?

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/1/2013 10:10:00 AM

Beautifully developed, Sara, short and sweet! Thank you!