Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Man Donned In Yellow

man donned in yellow
rain slicker dripping wet knocked....
two pomegrantes

sweet husband bearing
gifts of the pomegrante...
one large, one small fruit

three pomegrante
bushes only fruit bearing...
remembers just me  

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Jan Allison December 27, 2014 at 6:07 PM wonderful string of haiku many congrats:-) Hugs Jan x

Sandra Haight December 27, 2014 at 2:33 PM Hi Sara, congratulations on your win for this sweet Haiku! A perfect image of love. Hugs, Sandra

Robert Stoner Jr December 27, 2014 at 12:14 PM congratulations Sara for this fine win

Maurice Yvonne December 27, 2014 at 9:11 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win!

Poet Destroyer A December 27, 2014 at 12:42 AM SARA, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Sorry, it took this long to post the winning poems. Stop by my latest blog "A Woman's Gift" if you'd like. Enjoy life and the Holidays. :) Always ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2013 at 5:59 PM soupmail, right away!!!

Poet Destroyer A November 3, 2013 at 10:32 PM Beautiful Sara.... you sure know how to paint such a beautiful canvas.... love LINDA

Jack Horne November 3, 2013 at 10:16 AM what a lovely write, my friend. That's quite exotic fruit over here

Anne-Lise Andresen November 3, 2013 at 6:57 AM - Simply amazing, Sara !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Maverick November 2, 2013 at 3:31 PM Enriching memory you share here Sara, So plesent a read; Joe..)

Donna Jones November 2, 2013 at 12:20 PM These were wonderful Sara....:-) :-) :-) Such a distinct picture....

Poet. Undertaker November 2, 2013 at 11:17 AM great haiku.wonderful Sara. (: )Jenish.

Sandra Adams November 1, 2013 at 9:07 PM I love how you crafted these haiku together...I could see him standing in the rain picking them in his yellow slicker...proudly bearing gifts for you...great work!

Russell Sivey November 1, 2013 at 8:05 PM Three wonderful Haiku that you have written here my friend! I surely enjoyed reading these delightful poems this evening! What harmonious pieces you have written here, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2013 at 6:19 PM sorry, I went back and reread it and did not reread the second one to catch that! Sara Kendrick November 1, 2013 at 6:23 PM That was okay for we sometimes don't read too closely just skim unless something catches our attention then we will read again..Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2013 at 6:05 PM these were interesting to see. Who was this man?

Demetrios Trifiatis November 1, 2013 at 10:10 AM Beautifully developed, Sara, short and sweet! Thank you!