Man and Heaven

Man, a ball that falls from heaven, bounces on earth and returns to heaven! 


 



© Demetrios Trifiatis
     12 February 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 6:28 PM
I sure hope you are right on that one. But I fear some will defy gravity and not bounce back!!!
Trifiatis Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 5:39 AM
My dear Andrea, since we are born we are going to die! Case closed! No exceptions here! haha!
Hicks Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 10:55 PM
I take one look at your page, and I see so many monokus! Will be excited to read more --- this one has the rare element of being both whimsical and profound.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 5:40 AM
You are right , dear Timothy, it is both as life is! Thank you!
Tor Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 7:37 PM
A true analogy of what happens to us, Demetrios. Stay well and Gods blessings my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 5:42 AM
Thank you Michael, my friend, God bless you!
Devnath  Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 9:14 AM
A great reflection from earth to heaven, my lovely friend,bl
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Yes, dear BL! A great one! Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 6:58 AM
- Hmmm ..... deep ..... give me a picture of God's angels ..... (maybe too deep for "little me" :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 8:29 AM
You are not little at all, dearest Anne-Lise! Your poems are your best witnesses! Thank you so much! hugs!
Nunez Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 5:10 AM
A very unique and interesting metaphor, sire. I'm glad he bounces! Kind regards...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 5:39 AM
Wonderful to see you again, dear Kim! Thank you for your lovely comment! Have a marvelous weekend!
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