Man

Man is superb in the whole nature.
He can over power every creature.
Man controls any animal by using his wit
and makes use of one for his own benefit.
Mighty lions are brought well under control.
Big elephants are playing very useful role.
Many animals are busy in service of man
and work very hard, do what these can.
Man can catch very poisonous snakes.
Poison is used in medicines,everybody takes.
Sea animals are caught for delicious food.
Sea food is taken by man to keep good mood.
Many birds are roasted to make tasty meat.
Man can kill any one which he wants to eat.
To trap other creatures ,he plans every day.
He shoots every one which comes on his way.
A person hides himself to save his life.
The man becomes animal in his strife.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Mac Donald Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Hi there Gurmukh! This is a powerful and paradoxal piece. Sad and wasteful when man with all his intelligence and wit, will use it to kill another. Wishing you and yours the best! Blessing to you! Mikki
Santiago Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 1:40 PM
You've relayed your thought so well, great job done! Thanks for your comment. Rgds, Ernesto
Mason Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 7:46 PM
Powerful write that in a paradoxical way shows up the ignorance of man who, supposedly the highest life form, knows only how to destroy what he was meant to take care of. Congratulations to you, Gurmukh and to PoetrySoup on a well-deserved selection to be featured this week.
Richards Avatar
November 11, 2008 at 5:43 PM
Very deserved poem to be featured this week! Well said. ~ Congratulations on being featured this week. Carrie
Winter Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2008 at 3:59 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week.Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 9, 2008 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations on "Man" being featured. Yes he does become animal himself. Vince
Loving Iii Avatar
November 8, 2008 at 8:42 AM
man is like god on earth. he was commanded by God to subdue the earth. and this piece sums it up. good work. jhl
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