Mama Please Don'T Cry

MAMA PLEASE DON'T CRY

She smiled through the waves of pain
And held her mother's hand.
"Oh, Mama please don't cry," she said.
"And try to understand.
God wants me up in heaven now.
I hear him calling me.
There's lots of angels singing out.
It sounds so heavenly.

"Oh Mama please don't cry," she said.
"It's time for me to go.
You've given me your love and joy.
And Mom I love you so."
She wipes away her mama's tears
And looks into her eyes.
Then drifts into the Lord's sweet hands
As they say their goodbyes.

Now Mama hears her little girl;
"Oh, Mama please don't cry."
So brave and strong her little one:
The day they said goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Jeavons Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Wow Robert! The very first poem of yours that I read, touched my soul! I lost my son 3 years ago to mental illness. He would have been 50. Your poem is the best I have read in a long time! Perfect rhyme and meter. My new favorite poet and poem. Blessings, Susan Maree
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July 7, 2017 at 6:27 PM
This hits home for me. Similar to mine, "Hush my baby to cry for mama". Heartfelt, I love it :)
Deschler Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 1:21 PM
A truly beautiful poem that touches the reader's heart so deeply... The rhyming and the flow of these lines is just wonderful, Robert. Well done!
Nehls Avatar
April 3, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Hi Kelly. So nice to hear from you. Thank you so much for your kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.... Robert.
Hay Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 10:52 AM
#7 so delicately done, a lump in my throat reading this, well done!
Nehls Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Hi Laura. Thanks so much for reading this one. I too get a lump in my throat every time I read it. Your comments are well appreciated, my friend...... Robert.
Smith Avatar
January 20, 2017 at 1:20 PM
The loss of a child.. Only God could possibly get one through.. Very touching, my friend..
Nehls Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:05 AM
Hi Arlene. Nice to hear from you. Thanks so much for the comment. Yes, God is a great comforter. I hope everything is going well for you, my friend....... Robert.
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December 13, 2016 at 7:01 AM
I, like so many are glad to have you back, I've been away a short while myself. This piece like all your work is indeed inspiring and as always I will read this over and over until your next entry. God Bless Robert
Nehls Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 4:53 PM
Hey Jerry. Thanks for your kind comments. I always like hearing from you, my friend. and look forward to reading more of your poems. Bless you my friend..... Robert.
Callus Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Without doubt, Robert, a poem worth waiting for. Must admit I ended up with misty eyes! Strength of character and true faith are most noticeable. #7 Best regards // paul
Nehls Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Hi Paul. Thanks for the comment, my friend. I must also admit that I too get misty eyes each time I read this one. Faith can bring a strength that can get us through the hardest times.....Robert.
Teagan Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 9:02 AM
A brave little girl... I can't imagine losing one of my children. It would hurt too much to bear. But knowing she's in heaven is a comfort. Very touching poem, Robert... so good to see you posting again!
Nehls Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Hi Becca. So nice of you to read this one. Yes, it would be hard to bear but the presence of God can be such a comfort. I appreciate your comment. Bless you my friend..... Robert.
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 9:38 AM
This touch my heart with emotions, little children that have not yet had a life to move on to have so much courage . Good verse hugs Eve
Nehls Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 4:42 PM
Thanks so much Eve for reading this one. I'm glad you liked it..... Robert.
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December 10, 2016 at 3:43 PM
- Hey Robert - A heartbreaking poetry, beautiful described - Children can understand death better than adults, sometimes ... - Nice to see you back - Best wishes for a peaceful Christmas - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nehls Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Hi Anne-Lise. Thanks so much for reading this poem and for your comments. I hope life is going well and I also wish you a wonderful and peaceful Christmas...... Robert.
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December 10, 2016 at 11:35 AM
WoW! Robert, you have most definitely penned a tear jerker. I found myself on the verge of tears when as I started to read this heart felt piece . As a mother I couldn't bare to think of this. But I know this happens all the time. You expressed that fact very well in this heartfelt write. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis PS, Although I find this write to be bitter sweet it's good to see a post from you.
Nehls Avatar
December 11, 2016 at 9:00 AM
Hi Alexis. Thank you so much for your comment and for the seven. I too find myself on the verge of tears when I read this poem out loud. There is a strength, faith and compassion in children that can teach us much. Have a beautiful day, my friend...Robert.
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