Mama

You are the meaning of true life you make everything wrong right I wish I could walk like you your smile your grace is so true I'm so happy to have a mother like you one who understands we all go through bad times but when I fall you are there to put me on the line you keep me focused wih my eye on the prize everlasting life we all have inside mama you've seen me at my worst times but you always back me up at the drop of a dime you don't always rescue me it's just like you say sometimes we just learn the hard way I am so glad I can call you my mom your style all of that is the bomb THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN BY MY DAUGHTER TANIA PLEDGER, DEDICATED TO ME WRITTEN 11-7-07

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Adell Foster

Date: 9/9/2008 5:36:00 AM

Deneen, you are truly blessed to have such a loving and talented daughter, this is a very lovely tribute... I thank you for sharing the read :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/25/2008 8:24:00 AM

Hi Deneen, Like mother like daughter. Your daughter's poem is simply superb. A glowing tribute to you. She has great talents. Thanks also for your lavish praise of my poem The Sound of Silence. -Mohammad

James Foulk

Date: 8/23/2008 4:52:00 PM

very sweet of your daughter and not a bad piece of poetry, filled with lots of love and tender caring. thank you for reading my too full of love and for your comment.

Leah Yoho

Date: 8/23/2008 12:50:00 PM

Deneen, your daughter obviously loves you verry much. She is also an exelent author, wonder where she gets it;) love Always, Leah.

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/16/2008 12:58:00 PM

A great tribute and one to cherish for life. Tell her well done. Regards Heidie

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/14/2008 9:25:00 PM

beautiful poem. your daughter and you have talent.

P Sheart

Date: 8/14/2008 9:07:00 AM

Hi hun, Oh so precious!What a soul's embrace to recieve a poem like this from ones daughter. I know you'll cherish it as much as life itself. Just beautiful. The power of love is just amazing....Love Light Truth Patricia

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/14/2008 6:22:00 AM

Wow. What a gift to treasure forever. Good job mom! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/13/2008 7:24:00 PM

What a beautiful poem, you must be a wonderful mom to have it written for you!....Lovely....Carrie

Christy Hardy

Date: 8/13/2008 6:40:00 PM

You are so blessed, love this write, Always, Christy