Making the Right Choice

I put my life up on a shelf
Whispered to the rolling sea
Come and help me find myself
Either that or let me be

The sea spoke back in muted tone
Told me all that I once knew
Things like I was not alone
With those words the silence grew

Memories are tough to lose
When they're what keeps you afloat
There are things you mustn't choose
Times you should stay on the boat

All the love I sought and lost
This night came to haunt me still
I was measuring the cost
Rolling that rock up the hill

When it did occur to me
My life was my own to spare
Only I could set it free
Nothing that I could not bear

I'll paddle my way to shore
Or find a lifeboat I can use
No telling what life has in store
But with some light I cannot lose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Phipps Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Great writing...paddle that boat-the light is always there in the distance. And, thank you for commenting on my poem about my mother. It is her 68th Birthday today!-We both cried together reading what I wrote for her, it was one of those moments that take your breath away.
Chappell Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 4:58 AM
i love this peace thankyou for sharing my friend duncan
D. Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 12:18 PM
well done Deb, on following the light' luv n.d
Brown Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Starting my weekend early reading all the amazing poetry of all the wonderful poets here at PoetrySoup. I am so happy to find your poetry posted here this morning Deb. Have a wonderful weekend and I hope you find tons of inspiration along the way as Fall is upon us. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 10:32 PM
You definitely can not lose with some Light, Catie. Beautiful... Love, audrey
Mehta Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 3:34 PM
Very expressive write on the making the right choise in life, Deb
Roberts Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 1:26 PM
lovely piece Deb, beautifully written
Neels Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 12:16 PM
I enjoyed your introspective write Deb! In the end it's all about choice. You brought that across brilliantly ;) love Wilma
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