Making Out With a Monster

At first it was magic
Sparks flew, the works
No words could describe it
All the thrill as emotions burst..

Mindless, blissful moments
Innocence thrown out the window
Who cares about the audience
It’s just you in me in this show..

Everything was alright
Everything’s goin our way
You took me on a flight
We never counted the days..

But as the journey gets longer
I hit bumps along your road
And as I go deeper
Your teeth start to show..

Strawberry’s no longer sweet
Even milk starts to sour
The bird lies flat on its feet
The bees don’t make money no more..

What used to feel so right
Have now all gone wrong
Our beautiful days turn into cold nights
A demon has reared and my angel is gone..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Agustin Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 8:53 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 21, 2016 at 10:40 PM
Rany, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 15, 2016 at 7:58 PM
RANY, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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