Making Miel

Letting go lightly
like bee flying from flower
with nectar for miel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 22, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Beautiful imagery, so clear and flowing while the form is perfect for the Haiku. Michael
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