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Making Memories With Grandsons

marshmallows, toothpicks,
m&m’s and pretzel sticks —
snowmen on the fly

12/11/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Romios Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 11:17 AM
Love it! Pangiexxxx
Theraven Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 8:51 PM
Kim, This Haiku has a two-fold gift. Memories made will always be there to sustain you. The memories they hold of you will sustain them when they're grown and it's their turn to make snowmen. -Richard
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:22 AM
I think you are there with us, in heart. Thank you, Richard!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 4:54 PM
This sounds delightful; a big "wow" in their memory banks for years to come, maybe decades to come, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:22 AM
Thank you :) God’s blessings, dear one!
Andresen Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:37 PM
- So sweet, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 2:22 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 5:20 AM
Nothing better than those memories we create-- that they will remember for ever. A lovely poem you wrote, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Thank you!
Mcintosh Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 4:50 AM
A D O R A B L E - the best memories!!! Love it - God bless you
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 6:00 PM
Wishing you more and more memories every season, Kim. Enjoy those grandkids, as much as I'm sure they enjoy you. ~ Laughter and Light, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:03 PM
Thank you!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 2:45 PM
A fun way to create memories. Blessings for the season. Hugs Rick.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 9:14 AM
Lovely memories. We hold on to them ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 4:02 PM
Yes we do!
Y. Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 8:23 AM
Hi Kim, You have penned precious memories, shared with you and your grandson. Thanks for sharing this gem. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Thanks, Alexis! Not the most thought provoking but truly a memory share!
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