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Making Love In the Rain

While gazing in her soft blue eyes,
   a tender gentle smile
lights up her face like morn’s sunrise
   and lingers there a while.
Her face so bright it lights the day
with thoughts of love it does convey.
      Her face so bright…
         her face so bright,
   like guiding star it shows the way.

While gazing in her soft blue eyes
   the rain begins to fall
from clouds above up in the skies
   as nature makes her call.
They hold on tight in love’s embrace,
a feeling time cannot erase;
      they hold on tight…
         they hold on tight
   as raindrops trickle down her face.

While gazing in her soft blue eyes
   he gently kisses lips
eliciting her tender sighs;
   her hands around his hips.
She holds him close in love’s refrain,
her carnal pleasure to obtain;
      she holds him close…
         she holds him close
   while making love out in the rain.


October 20, 2018
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Ravidas Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Interesting form, perfect rhymes, expressive content. The masterful work.
Gondolf Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 4:52 PM
Thanks, Kurt, I appreciate it. John
Nicole Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Any moment is perfect for love, to feel its touch. Having the rain surround you, while caressing such a moment- is bliss. Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate you. It is on my bucket list of things to do. :) John
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 7:37 AM
The beautiful rhythmic feel of love! Congrats, John!
Gondolf Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 7:57 AM
thank you, Kim!
Watson Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 4:22 AM
How romantic, John and as usual, with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme. I loved the reinforcing repetition. Congratulations. Wendy
Gondolf Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 4:38 AM
Thank you, Wendy, I appreciate it. John
Way Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 7:49 AM
lovely scence!
Gondolf Avatar
October 28, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Thank you, Charlie, I appreciate it. John
Y. Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:06 PM
WoW! John, I must say your title alone caught my attention. I thought to myself "that is one romantic title" .But as I begin to read you did not disappoint. It was soooo romantic and well written. I enjoyed it from start to finish. The imagery was spot on. I could just picture the lovely scence. It was just breathtaking. It was a pleasure to read your romantic piece today. You told a beautiful story. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Gondolf Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Alexis, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. My fantasies are filled with magical moments like this. I appreciate you and your thoughts. John
Kiser Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 5:04 PM
A beautiful romantic poem; such warmth and happiness...good luck with the contest.
Gondolf Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 5:29 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comment, I appreciate it. John
Warrior Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Lovely said my friend...romance at its best...ready for a win...love & light...^WW^
Gondolf Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Thank you, WW, I appreciate your comments. John
Tapestry Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 11:13 PM
Alludes to much - sensual and loving. I enjoyed this
Gondolf Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 4:14 AM
Robyn, thank you for your comments and visit, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 6:29 PM
No greater place to make love then in the rain where the rain drops send shivers down the spine and quench to thirst of lovers all over the world, nice poem John.
Gondolf Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Pixie, these magical moments are enjoyed by lovers everywhere. Something special about the great outdoors, nature, and love. John
Nicole Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 5:27 PM
There are moments when, love is magnetic- when the pull is truly breathtaking. And, you never wish for it to end. This is one of those moments. Yes, to make love in the rain. Oh my!! My thoughts linger. This is so beautiful John. Romance and passion caress around each and every word. ~ Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 6:09 PM
Thank you, Brandy, your comments are always appreciated. Yes moments like this are truly breathtaking. I’m glad I left you with some lingering thoughts this afternoon. I appreciate you and your thoughts. John
Onclaud Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 1:03 PM
ohh john , refreshingly passionate with sweet touch of love's thrill... well penned!...huggs
Gondolf Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, I appreciate it. John
Sergi Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 11:31 AM
You created a very sensual love story in the rain! My compliments, John!!
Gondolf Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Thanks, Ralph, I appreciate it. John
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