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While gazing in her soft blue eyes, a tender gentle smile lights up her face like morn’s sunrise and lingers there a while. Her face so bright it lights the day with thoughts of love it does convey. Her face so bright… her face so bright, like guiding star it shows the way. While gazing in her soft blue eyes the rain begins to fall from clouds above up in the skies as nature makes her call. They hold on tight in love’s embrace, a feeling time cannot erase; they hold on tight… they hold on tight as raindrops trickle down her face. While gazing in her soft blue eyes he gently kisses lips eliciting her tender sighs; her hands around his hips. She holds him close in love’s refrain, her carnal pleasure to obtain; she holds him close… she holds him close while making love out in the rain. October 20, 2018

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Date: 4/21/2019 4:23:00 PM
Interesting form, perfect rhymes, expressive content. The masterful work.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/21/2019 4:52:00 PM
Thanks, Kurt, I appreciate it. John
Date: 11/1/2018 3:55:00 PM
Any moment is perfect for love, to feel its touch. Having the rain surround you, while caressing such a moment- is bliss. Congratulations John, on this win. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/1/2018 5:12:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, I appreciate you. It is on my bucket list of things to do. :) John
Date: 11/1/2018 7:37:00 AM
The beautiful rhythmic feel of love! Congrats, John!
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/1/2018 7:57:00 AM
thank you, Kim!
Date: 11/1/2018 4:22:00 AM
How romantic, John and as usual, with a wonderful rhythm and rhyme. I loved the reinforcing repetition. Congratulations. Wendy
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John Gondolf
Date: 11/1/2018 4:38:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy, I appreciate it. John
Date: 10/28/2018 7:49:00 AM
lovely scence!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/28/2018 12:09:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie, I appreciate it. John
Date: 10/25/2018 7:06:00 PM
WoW! John, I must say your title alone caught my attention. I thought to myself "that is one romantic title" .But as I begin to read you did not disappoint. It was soooo romantic and well written. I enjoyed it from start to finish. The imagery was spot on. I could just picture the lovely scence. It was just breathtaking. It was a pleasure to read your romantic piece today. You told a beautiful story. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/25/2018 7:45:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Alexis, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. My fantasies are filled with magical moments like this. I appreciate you and your thoughts. John
Date: 10/23/2018 5:04:00 PM
A beautiful romantic poem; such warmth and happiness...good luck with the contest.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/23/2018 5:29:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful comment, I appreciate it. John
Date: 10/23/2018 10:15:00 AM
Lovely said my friend...romance at its best...ready for a win...love & light...^WW^
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/23/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thank you, WW, I appreciate your comments. John
Date: 10/20/2018 11:13:00 PM
Alludes to much - sensual and loving. I enjoyed this
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/22/2018 4:14:00 AM
Robyn, thank you for your comments and visit, I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 10/20/2018 6:29:00 PM
No greater place to make love then in the rain where the rain drops send shivers down the spine and quench to thirst of lovers all over the world, nice poem John.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/20/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Pixie, these magical moments are enjoyed by lovers everywhere. Something special about the great outdoors, nature, and love. John
Date: 10/20/2018 5:27:00 PM
There are moments when, love is magnetic- when the pull is truly breathtaking. And, you never wish for it to end. This is one of those moments. Yes, to make love in the rain. Oh my!! My thoughts linger. This is so beautiful John. Romance and passion caress around each and every word. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/20/2018 6:09:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy, your comments are always appreciated. Yes moments like this are truly breathtaking. I’m glad I left you with some lingering thoughts this afternoon. I appreciate you and your thoughts. John
Date: 10/20/2018 4:43:00 PM
Beautiful John, very sensual and passionate. Expressed so well.
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/20/2018 6:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandy, I appreciate you and your thoughts. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 10/20/2018 1:03:00 PM
ohh john , refreshingly passionate with sweet touch of love's thrill... well penned!...huggs
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/20/2018 2:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, I appreciate it. John
Date: 10/20/2018 11:31:00 AM
You created a very sensual love story in the rain! My compliments, John!!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/20/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thanks, Ralph, I appreciate it. John

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