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Making Love In the Park

Walked into a wall, a concrete wall It shook me up good, I tried not to bawl Was dreaming of us making love in the park We should have waited at least until dark A couple of people then a crowd did appear Watching and giggling and giving a cheer On the love making scale, we won top spot We'd gone too far, we just couldn't stop It's as if they were watching a sporting event Till whammo, we lay panting and spent They filed away as if after a game Talking bout how we showed them no shame Truth of the matter, we weren't aware A crowd of onlookers had gathered and stared Involved in an amazing moment of bliss We carried on not a beat did we miss A lesson we learned from that day in the park Next time we'll surely wait until dark

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Date: 3/24/2023 7:22:00 PM
WoW Jack not many could beat a record like that. Its a great poem. Sure gave me a smile Jack Love is in the air, a few are getting very amorous in their poems.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/25/2023 4:44:00 AM
DREAMING!!!!! LOL Oh for those days of wonder! I was naughty today eh! How's my sweetie Aussie today? Love Happy Jack XOX
Date: 3/24/2023 6:37:00 AM
You're about a randy ol sod:) This was a fun one Jack Don't you know that sex at age 90 is like trying to shoot pool with a rope. LOL See you tomorrow Jack:)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 3/24/2023 7:04:00 AM
(BIG CHUCKLE DAN!!!) Only 2 years to go... CRAP! Like your simile! LOL Whatta pair eh!!!

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