Billy Thekidster Poet Rhyme

Making Love

Making love to a beautiful woman
has always affected me strangely.
I often feel as if I am fouling
their magnificent body of beauty.
I guess there must be something seriously wrong with me.

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Kathryn Collins August 26, 2012 at 11:29 AM Yes I think so, but obviously the beautiful woman doesn't.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 12, 2012 at 2:02 PM Beautiful day to be reading and enjoying poetry Billy. Hope to be back reading more in a week or so. Love, Carol

Bradley Cox August 11, 2012 at 12:13 PM Great write

Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2012 at 11:09 AM Here is the cure from the doctor Mr.Luringen * Take 1 of the yellow - 2 of the green - 2 of the orange - 1 spoon of the blue bottle - and 4 of the small pink one - * - Good luck with the ladies - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ian D. Campbell August 11, 2012 at 11:08 AM Its very simple, but yet complex. Especially the last statement. Thanks for sharing.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 11, 2012 at 10:16 AM I guess there must be , you are hot xx