Making Dreams Come True

Where breathes the life we so ingest
Of dreams that never manifest?
We take, we hope, we pray them true
What else are we supposed to do?
With every action that we must make
Allow from life, your heart, to take
The then results, you will not rue
As then your dreams would have come true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 22, 2008 at 8:55 AM
Hello Michael Ahhh, I love the ying/yang so to speak in this poignant write. The ryhme and rythem give a special feeling to this wonderful write. A lovely read dear Michael. Take care hun, many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia
Nelson Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 10:38 AM
Michael so poignant and so true. Why do we feel that we have control when everything is in God's hands? Lovely sentiment. always a pleasure to read your work, love louise nelson
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September 18, 2008 at 4:45 PM
Another very well written poem, filled with wisdom and so very uplifting. You are on a roll. Good job. Regards Heidie
Jordan Avatar
September 16, 2008 at 10:44 AM
Michael - excellent rhyme and flow in this one and the message is clearly beautiful - I thank you for the comments you made today and your continued supportive friendship - God Bless
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