Makin Rice Krispy Treats

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' Twas entangled in marshmallows. Trying to make rice Krispie's. That could share with goodfellows. Maybe should have tried Swiss cheese. A system tried to develop. Waxed paper didn't untangle. Many emotions did swell up. Hand, mouth, tongue 'twas entangled 3rd try on this Ae Freislighe poetry form

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/14/2023 1:48:00 AM

Experience will give you perfection.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/14/2023 1:56:00 AM

Yes, learning when one makes a mistake helps, Victor. I don't know if I'll make them that often to remember my mistakes. LOL..Maybe I should fix them about once a week so I can get better at it. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2023 12:12:00 PM

- Sounds really sweet and sticky, Sara :) -Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/13/2023 2:21:00 PM

It was really, really sticky while it was still warm. Um, um, I 'm all stuck up. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/13/2023 11:52:00 AM

Hello Sara, I wanted to read this poem. WhenI scrolled down there wasn't any poem to read. I thought I thought I would let you know. Enjoy your day my friend./darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/13/2023 2:30:00 PM

Hello Sara, okay when you have it I will read the poem. Oh! I love the poem. Yes this treat can be sticky. Yet it is tasty you can not help yourself for wanting more. Now I amin the mood for this treat. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/13/2023 11:55:00 AM

Darlene, I am so sorry about this. I have it written, but my husband came in wanting lunch so I had to leave before I could type it in and post it. LOL..I will put it in now so there won't be a blank page. Sara