Makeshift Spaceship

She needs space
She needs more than this
She needs change 
Metomorphasis 
The more I give the more I get
The more I give the more I drift
Out of sight 
out of mind
To explore 
Space and time

I'll see the elastic skies 
strecthing out far and wide
A new place to reside

I'll sail passed the seven seas 
And see the world from the galaxies

It's my own haste escape to float away
a getaway in outer space

Im saving this relationship 
A space cadet with all the space I can get 
In my makeshift spaceship
                                 [realization that space in a relationship means the end]
We can throw it all away
or we can take hold
We can fight and find a way
 or we can let it go
Light years light the way
to a black hole
I'd cry tears for YOU to stay
At least call me home

Im returning burning through the atmosphere
All I wanna do is clear the air
                        
All I need is some air to breath
some water to drink
and some life to eat
I dont need you, you're a luxury 
                                             [space madness]
I tried to belive in you and me and living for eternity but now I see you are my own enemy sending me to death by odyssey and honestly its gonna be the end of me your frienemy its gonna rip the heart out me but silently im gonna break this gravity thats grabbing me im gonna find a remedy to set me free. In my Makeshift Spaceship.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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