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Makes Me Whole

When I look, I stare Always taking my breath away, From your toes to your hair I could do this each and every day. When I hold, I grasp Always clenching to your touch, Like a lock to a clasp You are my pedal to my clutch. When I smell, I endure You and all of your scents, All so perfect and pure Everything on the outside only misrepresents. When I like, I always love Every single glimpse of your breath-taking soul, The kind of feeling I'd never let go of It is the kind that makes me whole. Written and posted on March 30th, 2016 By: Michelle Corbin

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Date: 7/7/2016 6:25:00 PM
Thank you to everyone who posted their thoughts! <333
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Date: 5/30/2016 1:14:00 PM
Lovely penning Michelle, superbly written with nice rhyme!
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Date: 3/31/2016 11:05:00 AM
Heart touching one!
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Date: 3/31/2016 12:44:00 AM
I love the uplifting feeling Michelle. LINDA
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