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Make Your Own Rules

The world loves dictating terms To keep you in check And in line; telling you Who you ought to be But you have the freedom To zig When told To zag. Listen to your inner voice instead. Make your own rules. Date written: 12/15/2021

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Date: 12/15/2021 11:23:00 AM
Hello Edward, I listen to my inn voice all the time. This is good advice in poetry form. Blessings my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/16/2021 12:39:00 PM
Hello Edward, you are welcome my friend. Blessings.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/15/2021 3:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene:-)
Date: 12/15/2021 9:42:00 AM
The inner voice never disappoints--keeps things in balance.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/15/2021 3:42:00 PM
True indeed, Vijay! Thanks for dropping by my friend.
Date: 12/15/2021 8:50:00 AM
Edward, I truly understand the spirit behind your idea, but I'm not sure it's always a good idea to "Make Your Own Rules." I can imagine chaos on the highways and in classrooms, for example! Thought-provoking, though.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/15/2021 3:40:00 PM
Oh, I see what you're saying, Milt, and I agree! I was rather addressing a certain age demographic--responsible, mature adults with sound judgement--not all and sundry. I guess I should've made it clear, lol. Thanks for the visit, my friend.

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