Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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Bite Size Poem No.96 Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Line Gauthier. Date written: 12/23/2024

Make Your Move

    Deep down, you know how you feel,
    But the object of your affection sits
In the dark unaware. Out there, someone 
         With a flashlight, is on the way.
   Take a chance; make your move, now.
           Your greatest enemy is time.

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Janice Canerdy December 31, 2024 at 7:28 AM This concise poem provides strong, logical advice for the reluctant. CONGRATS on your win, Edward! Happy New Year. Janice Edward Ibeh January 2, 2025 at 5:34 AM Thank you very much, Janice:-) Same to you!

Terry Miller December 31, 2024 at 1:17 AM Very true message beautifully penned, congratulations Edward Ibeh December 31, 2024 at 4:49 AM Thank you so much for the congratulations and visit, Terry: Happy New Year!

Line Gauthier December 30, 2024 at 7:21 PM Great conclusion ~ strong message Edward Ibeh December 31, 2024 at 4:48 AM Thank you very much for my placement and the comment, Line. Most obliged. Happy New Year!

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2024 at 8:59 AM Very nice. Great metaphor. I don't know how she chooses her winners. Always I see so many outstanding ones! Edward Ibeh December 29, 2024 at 6:30 AM Thank you very much, Andrea;-)

Darlene De Beaulieu December 23, 2024 at 11:08 AM Hello Edward , I want to wish you a Merry Christmas and best wishes for the New Year. blessings my friend. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu December 29, 2024 at 11:07 AM Hello Edward, I hope you an your family had an enjoyable Christmas. All the best for the New Year. blessings my friend. /Darlene/ Edward Ibeh December 29, 2024 at 6:31 AM Thank you very much, Darlene;-) Same to you!

Tom Cunningham December 23, 2024 at 8:40 AM So true Edward, time waits for no man. Have a wonderful Christmas and a happy new year. Tom Edward Ibeh December 29, 2024 at 6:32 AM Thank you very much, Tom:-) Same to you!