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Bite Size Poem No.96 Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Line Gauthier. Date written: 12/23/2024
Deep down, you know how you feel, But the object of your affection sits In the dark unaware. Out there, someone With a flashlight, is on the way. Take a chance; make your move, now. Your greatest enemy is time.

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Date: 12/31/2024 7:28:00 AM
This concise poem provides strong, logical advice for the reluctant. CONGRATS on your win, Edward! Happy New Year. Janice
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/2/2025 5:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice:-) Same to you!
Date: 12/31/2024 1:17:00 AM
Very true message beautifully penned, congratulations
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/31/2024 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for the congratulations and visit, Terry: Happy New Year!
Date: 12/30/2024 7:21:00 PM
Great conclusion ~ strong message
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/31/2024 4:48:00 AM
Thank you very much for my placement and the comment, Line. Most obliged. Happy New Year!
Date: 12/27/2024 8:59:00 AM
Very nice. Great metaphor. I don't know how she chooses her winners. Always I see so many outstanding ones!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/29/2024 6:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Andrea;-)
Date: 12/23/2024 11:08:00 AM
Hello Edward , I want to wish you a Merry Christmas and best wishes for the New Year. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/29/2024 11:07:00 AM
Hello Edward, I hope you an your family had an enjoyable Christmas. All the best for the New Year. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/29/2024 6:31:00 AM
Thank you very much, Darlene;-) Same to you!
Date: 12/23/2024 8:40:00 AM
So true Edward, time waits for no man. Have a wonderful Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/29/2024 6:32:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom:-) Same to you!

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