Make Up World

Never alone in a make out world 
with her face pressed upon a window pane 
her breath exhaling a misty dew 
with a finger letters she writes 
drying up once a shine glass 
inhaling the air 
deep into her soul 
breathing the letters of your name 
on her heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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July 17, 2012 at 10:31 PM
‡ This Is Beautiful Beautiful Dawn * I Could See Your Precious Loving Beauty Standing There Amid Twilights Embrace In The Still Of The Quite Restive City * Mesmerizing * 'Breathing The Letters Of Your Name On My Heart' * This Line Alone Would Warrant A High Place In Faves; Extremely Beautiful * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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July 17, 2012 at 10:41 PM
‡ Shania Twain's *.* 'Forever and for Always' ‡
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