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Make of Me

Take me to the dark side, fill my eyes with lime shine, taint my skin, make it a hide, make of me, of deadly might. Ray.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/18/2018 10:54:00 AM
In a few lines you packed a powerful message! Well done, Ray! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/19/2018 12:12:00 AM
Thanks, "economy of words" is what am practising. Am glad you love it.
Date: 6/18/2018 4:04:00 AM
Wow.. cool write! Come see me!!
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Date: 6/18/2018 5:08:00 AM
Thanks, who is this? And where?...

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