Make of Me

Take me to the dark side,
fill my eyes with lime shine,
taint my skin,
make it a hide,
make of me,
of deadly might.
Ray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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June 18, 2018 at 10:54 AM
In a few lines you packed a powerful message! Well done, Ray! Hugs. Pandita
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June 19, 2018 at 12:12 AM
Thanks, "economy of words" is what am practising. Am glad you love it.
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June 18, 2018 at 4:04 AM
Wow.. cool write! Come see me!!
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June 18, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Thanks, who is this? And where?...
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