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Make It To the Top

R-adiance of reflecting rays O-f the sun spreads everywhere; L-ightness lets the dawn A-chieve the time to shine brighter. N-ight before the early morn promises to vanish at daybreak; D-ark fades into the shadows, letting the fun replace the ache. P-ure delight turns the moment I-nto a happy celebration; N-ook is filled with joy, G-reetings cheer up the occasion. O-n twenty-first January, may the Lord lift you up; L-etting you climb the hill and make it to the top.

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Date: 1/24/2023 2:52:00 PM
"Achieve the time to shine brighter." Very strong line and beautiful imagery! Good work Bernard
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 1/25/2023 5:38:00 PM
Much thanks, dear Justin. Keep safe.

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