Make It So

Within the complexities of our minds
We create worlds and circumstances
When we thirst for the oasis of compassion
But lack it in real life
Then we conjure in our heads this tenderness
We change what is in our grasp
By reaching deep within our being

We make it so

If love is absent in this day of hate and rage
And what we desire is not found
Then, we must process and formulate
The antidote to spewing venom
We counteract these poisons
For even if it's not easily found in the natural
By bringing love to others and ourselves

We make it so

It is my belief that we are not the source
Of this love we long so to possess
No, we are all born of fleshly greed  
From whence we came, through ages past
Out of dust we rose and into dust we fall
But our Creator redeems each of us if we but ask
For He is the source of Light and Love

He’ll make it so

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/22/2009 10:30:00 PM
Another amazing piece. "When we thirst for the oasis of compassion But lack it in real life" that's a perfect line :D --Captain Dan
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Date: 1/27/2009 9:15:00 AM
This free verse is so clear with meaning and and strong in such as well, making for an incredible write. Michael
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Date: 1/27/2009 5:06:00 AM
Yes, we certainly do make it so. I see the love and wonder of our being in many, and sadly, the lack there of too, as you write. Beautiful, spiritual poetry. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/27/2009 3:58:00 AM
Love the flow to this piece. I also like the clear message that runs through the poem. You have a ease to your write that pulls the reader in and makes them feel comfortable. Love the style. Thanks for the love on my poem..will read more of you.
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Date: 1/27/2009 2:32:00 AM
Like the kyrielle flvour to this one.Donna.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/27/2009 1:16:00 AM
Wonderful writing. Yes, we all have the freedom to choose what becomes of us. No one can do it for us, we make it so...Love it, thanks for sharing. Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
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Date: 1/26/2009 9:05:00 PM
indeed He will make it so. Thank you for sharing such a strong declaration of faith and strength
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