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Make It Happen

While waiting for my ship to come in Others got to it first by going for a swim While waiting for opportunity to knock It was met in front of my door by a hungrier flock While waiting for my fifteen minutes of fame Others got noticed by not playing this game If I want good things to happen to me I guess I should pursue them more aggressively

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/15/2010 7:10:00 AM

Was truly a pleasure to be able to read your poetry today Joe. I hope you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/14/2010 1:11:00 PM

We do have to pursue our dreams and aspirations aggressively to stay ahead of the hungry flock. Very poignant and insightful poem, Joe. Love, Carolyn

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2010 1:07:00 PM

A WONDERFUL POEM.-SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2010 12:06:00 PM

I never read a short poem with so much energy in it.. Regardless your opinion on me I just had to place a comments and I’m sure there’s many more out there that will feel the same energy. Thank you for the last two lines..I feel we should do the same, so thanks for making an effort and offering your readers something more in definitely and better way to go get and pursue good things,,enjoyed Joe,, have a nice and blessed day,..p.d.

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/14/2010 11:54:00 AM

cute little rhyme