Make a Wish

Better health eludes me.
I tremor daily and fall.
Needing help now I foresee.
Pray now, and then stand tall.

Written 7 - 10 - 2016.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bankson Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 2:15 AM
So few words yet many!!!
Cheyney Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Thank you. I didn't used to enjoy writing the super short poems. But I'm finding that I do now. Not sure why the change, but for now I guess I'll go with it.
Chircop Avatar
July 11, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Oh prayers indeed can make us healthier..if not physically, spiritually,and when the spirit is strong we will stand tall... Loved your poem.
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