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I wish for memories to be doomed of all pains To forget our flaws and falls till this breath lasts Dispiritedness over failures drains us of worthy attains But to bounce back with gutsy force that in time outlasts Taking pride over our modest joys amidst rattling winter blasts English Quintain -rhyming scheme a b a b b July 9, 2016 Kim Merryman

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Date: 7/16/2016 9:51:00 AM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/27/2016 6:04:00 AM
A belated thanks Alexis!
Date: 7/15/2016 11:03:00 PM
Congrats on your 5th place win in the Make a Wish contest! - Jesse
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/16/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thanks for your congrats and visit Jesse!
Date: 7/15/2016 9:07:00 PM
Balveen, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/16/2016 6:47:00 AM
Many thanks Kim! It was such a simple and sweet contest!
Date: 7/12/2016 9:11:00 AM
An excellent wish from you~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 7/16/2016 6:48:00 AM
Glad you liked it, Andrea! Love...

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