Winged Warrior Poet Quintain (English)

Make a Wish

I make my wish I wish for you
As I passionately ponder in fields of green
The hours pass you are long overdue
And now I awake from a dormant dream
A cadaverous construct in a silent scream.


July.07.2016
Make a Wish - Poetry Contest
By Kim Merryman
Only form acceptable is English Quintain

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Beautiful Scars July 18, 2016 at 10:28 AM WW, a beautiful wish and a lovely poem you have written...be blessed...congrats on your placement :)-luloo Winged Warrior July 18, 2016 at 12:43 PM Thank you dear luloo...you are a beautiful soul...god bless...WW

Alexis Y. July 16, 2016 at 10:44 AM Hi WW, Congrats on your win in the Make A Wish Contest! It was well deserved:-) Alexis Winged Warrior July 16, 2016 at 10:46 AM Thank you Alexis...god bless...^WW^

Jesse Day July 15, 2016 at 11:13 PM Congrats on your 8th place win in the Make a Wish contest! - Jesse Winged Warrior July 16, 2016 at 10:38 AM Thank you Jesse...god bless...^WW^

Kim Merryman July 15, 2016 at 9:28 PM WW, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating! Winged Warrior July 16, 2016 at 10:37 AM Thank you Kim...it was fun!...god bless...^WW^

Jan Allison July 10, 2016 at 6:00 PM well written ^WW^ good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Winged Warrior July 10, 2016 at 6:40 PM Thank you Jan...hugs and blessings...WW

Richard Lamoureux July 10, 2016 at 10:41 AM I'm not familiar with the form but I like the affect. Winged Warrior July 10, 2016 at 10:53 AM Thank you Richard...neither am I lol...but its good to give everything a try...god bless...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen July 8, 2016 at 2:20 PM - Wonderful written, W.W. :) - I wish you a really great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Winged Warrior July 8, 2016 at 5:03 PM Thank you Anne-Lise...always nice to see your face and comments my friend...and a wonderful weekend to you...hugs and blessings...^WW^

Skat A July 8, 2016 at 1:13 PM enjoyed your write, thank you for sharing, **LUV SKAT** Winged Warrior July 8, 2016 at 5:00 PM Thank you Skat...its nice to see your face...god bless...^WW^

David Smith July 8, 2016 at 6:45 AM Builds nicely. Well constructed. Ends in rubble like some dreams do. Wishes are hard to construct. Good job. David from NZ Winged Warrior July 8, 2016 at 4:54 PM Thank you David...dreams in the long list of enigmas...god bless...^WW^