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Make A Wish

I make my wish I wish for you As I passionately ponder in fields of green The hours pass you are long overdue And now I awake from a dormant dream A cadaverous construct in a silent scream. July.07.2016 Make a Wish - Poetry Contest By Kim Merryman Only form acceptable is English Quintain

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Date: 7/18/2016 10:28:00 AM
WW, a beautiful wish and a lovely poem you have written...be blessed...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 7/18/2016 12:43:00 PM
Thank you dear luloo...you are a beautiful soul...god bless...WW
Date: 7/16/2016 10:44:00 AM
Hi WW, Congrats on your win in the Make A Wish Contest! It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/16/2016 10:46:00 AM
Thank you Alexis...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/15/2016 11:13:00 PM
Congrats on your 8th place win in the Make a Wish contest! - Jesse
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Date: 7/16/2016 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Jesse...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/15/2016 9:28:00 PM
WW, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating!
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Date: 7/16/2016 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Kim...it was fun!...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/10/2016 6:00:00 PM
well written ^WW^ good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/10/2016 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Jan...hugs and blessings...WW
Date: 7/10/2016 10:41:00 AM
I'm not familiar with the form but I like the affect.
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Date: 7/10/2016 10:53:00 AM
Thank you Richard...neither am I lol...but its good to give everything a try...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/8/2016 2:20:00 PM
- Wonderful written, W.W. :) - I wish you a really great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/8/2016 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...always nice to see your face and comments my friend...and a wonderful weekend to you...hugs and blessings...^WW^
Date: 7/8/2016 1:13:00 PM
enjoyed your write, thank you for sharing, **LUV SKAT**
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Date: 7/8/2016 5:00:00 PM
Thank you Skat...its nice to see your face...god bless...^WW^
Date: 7/8/2016 6:45:00 AM
Builds nicely. Well constructed. Ends in rubble like some dreams do. Wishes are hard to construct. Good job. David from NZ
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Date: 7/8/2016 4:54:00 PM
Thank you David...dreams in the long list of enigmas...god bless...^WW^