Make a Wish

I make a wish on each eyelash and shooting star
God, enable man to discover cure for Alzheimer’s disease
Don’t let the supreme human brain fade, rot and scar
to lose self, cognizance and lifelong memories
Wish loved ones no longer languish under the crease

Written on 07/07/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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July 16, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Hi Sara, I echo your wish.I wrote a poem on this very subject entitled "I'll Remember For Us Both ". I agree I hope they find a cure for this dreadful disease. Congrats on your win in the Make A Wish contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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July 16, 2016 at 2:32 PM
Thanks Alexis,your poem is so beautiful!
Day Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 11:21 PM
Congrats on your 9th place win in the Make a Wish contest - A very special wish to share! - Jesse
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July 16, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Thanks Jesse ,loved your poem too!
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 11:07 PM
Congrats on your placement. :)
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July 16, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Thanks Sunita,I so wish your wish comes true!Congrats to you too!
Merryman Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 9:37 PM
I agree that Alzheimer's disease and Dementia are horrible diseases that need a cure. Sara, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating!
Chansarkar Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 2:35 PM
Thanks for the placement,Kim!
Raynes Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 6:26 PM
A beautiful write Sara. Thanks
Chansarkar Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Thanks for stopping by Lewis!
Cheema Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 11:22 AM
How caring Sara!
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July 13, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Thanks for reading Balveen!
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July 13, 2016 at 7:56 AM
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July 8, 2016 at 10:45 AM
a wish i wish came true, enjoyed this Sara, **LUV SKAT**
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July 13, 2016 at 7:56 AM
Thanks Skat for the encouragement!
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