Make a Wish

You make a wish You blow a kiss Don't kick back now Why take a risk Wishes won't come true without an effort from you

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Date: 11/25/2019 12:44:00 AM

But they MIGHT come true anyway, right? You are correct about one thing. When you set your mind to something, poof! It arrives.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/25/2019 1:30:00 PM

Think and grow rich, as W. Clement Stone wrote. :) gw

Date: 11/24/2019 8:05:00 AM

So true, Gershon. Lovely gem.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:09:00 PM

Thank you so much for the encouragement, Line. Cheers, Gershon

Date: 11/24/2019 7:00:00 AM

True, love is not effortless.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:08:00 PM

Love is only effortless in Hollywood movies, methnks. :) gw

Date: 11/24/2019 2:56:00 AM

You said it perfectly my dear!;)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:08:00 PM

Can't ask for more in a comment than you've just given me, Brenda. Thank you so much! Best always, Gershon

Date: 11/24/2019 1:44:00 AM

This is really good! Thanks for sharing! -JWE

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/24/2019 1:07:00 PM

Thanks for the joy, J.W. Blessngs, Gershon