Majesty of the Bird of Prey

Majesty Of The Bird Of Prey
(Eyes of the Hawk)

In wilderness flies the bird of prey
above the earthly fight and battle
Far from immense foaming ocean spray
far above pastures and fat cattle
Gliding along spying for its meal
with those sharp all seeing eyes
Blessed with sharp claws of steel
marauder of the gentle blue skies
Soaring in wait for its coming kill
be it furry animal,fowl or fish
Nature blesses with awe, good or ill
such meaty meals,what a tasty dish

To its victims what a monster it may be
A wonder to we that can much further see.

Xxxxxxx   Xxxxxxxx
Nov, 12 1981
Note: The splendor and beauty of Nature awes us but there is the savage side to be seen too. And that savage side teaches us that sacrifices to survive require the ending of life of others.
Nowhere is that better seen or understood than in the actions of the earth's predators. Those that fly interest me more, for as young boy I dreamed of flying thousands of times.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 2:05 AM
Robert, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
Hay Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 10:29 AM
I really enjoyed this, it paints a vivid picture of beauty and the beast that are the predators of the sky. Well done, Kind Regards, Laura.
Deschler Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 6:45 PM
Yes, nature can be cruel at times, but it has always been so... A mother bird needs to kill the worm so her babies can survive... An interesting and captivating poem, my friend! Congrats on a great win!
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June 10, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Robert, please accept my congratulations on this all-around winner! Awesome symbolism and imagery make it an enjoyable read, deserving of a "7!" Warmest regards. Pandita"
Maverick Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 3:47 PM
A good counterbalance on the beauty of life and also the raw energy and viciousness of the bird of prey foraging Robert, congratulations..'
Callus Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 11:58 AM
This write about birds of prey is majestic in itself, Robert. Nature follows its rules and needs. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
Sirak Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 11:19 AM
Awesome! This one is for the hawk, but it could easily describe owls. I think they are the most beautiful of all birds.
Kiser Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Excellent! I have a hawk in my neighborhood and my cat is upset about not getting to go outside, but I'd rather not have her flung to the ground with a talon through her skull. I enjoyed this one.
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 1:16 PM
yes, nature does have its dark side and it's how God intended! I really like how you showed it with this descriptive sonnet!
A  Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Robert. Congratulations on your awesome win. HUGS **SKAT**
Ward Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 10:13 AM
I can see you are a master of nature poems! Julia, giving you the highest mark.
Gifford Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Hi, Robert, What a wonderful write about the hawk. And congratulations on your contest win. Blessings, Darlene
May Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 6:26 AM
Nature is of two extremes, one of beauty and one savagery, Great write and win...Congrats..
Allison Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 3:59 AM
Love the notes at the end of the very descriptive poem - am sure we have had that dream too:-) congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Trichet Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 10:06 PM
Congrats Robert, I enjoyed reading this and concur with your note - I too dreamt of the skies...
Merryman Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 8:51 PM
Excellent descriptiveness and rhyme! Congrats on your win, Robert! Love, Kim
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 4:39 PM
very enthralling Robert you took me there congrats on 2nd place hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 10:52 AM
You fly high with this piece my friend!
Konos Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 9:09 AM
Tremendous I hope you put it favorite old poems contest looks like a big winner to me
Hopper Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 8:31 AM
Beautiful flowing rhyme. Great word choice! A 7!
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