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Majestic Vision

Majestic vision
Inspiring the call to stop
To view the beauty

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Caroline Russ

March 4, 2009 at 1:32 PM

Ok. Thanks for the heads up.

Raul Moreno

March 4, 2009 at 1:31 PM

Beautiful work Caroline, I love this form, I welcome you to Poetrysoup. I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul

March 4, 2009 at 1:14 PM

Nice message in this one! I see you haven't been at Poetry Soup long. A belated welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. I see you have been responding to other writers below. Just to let you know that there are no links from your poem to that writer so he or she is unlikely to see your response. I would suggest to post the comments on one of his or her poems or use Soup Mail. Have a good day. Karen

Caroline Russ

February 27, 2009 at 9:08 AM

I agree. Life is too short not to stop and smell the roses. Caroline

Carolyn Devonshire

February 27, 2009 at 8:51 AM

Hi Caroline. Wise words in this great haiku. If we don't stop to "view the beauty," we'll never know what we missed. Well done, Carolyn

Caroline Russ

February 17, 2009 at 1:09 PM

Thanks.

Judy Riley

February 17, 2009 at 1:02 PM

Nice imagery and conecting thoughts, but the Haiku count is 5/7/5. The last line you have is only four, you could easy make a change by adding "To" infront of view. Good work, a joy to read. Judy Riley

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