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Majestic Mountain

Snowy white mountains,
Whispery clouds at the peak;
Parted by the sun.

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Abe Lopez

January 12, 2009 at 3:25 PM

Nice haiku, the imagery is excellent.

Daniel Neal

December 30, 2008 at 2:57 AM

But we'll see, when I sit down to look at my inspiration. I am going to work hard, to try and get one to the quality you are at. Later-DN

Daniel Neal

December 30, 2008 at 2:56 AM

Wow you have mastered this form quite well. You really put my work to shame. I look at mine and I think I have to write more and when I read your work, I think I can't beat him.