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Majestic Clouds

Billowing Majestic Clouds
                                  Dwarfed Mountains Cower
                                   Rain Marches Over Valley

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Sara Kendrick

November 8, 2022 at 1:50 PM

Enjoyed reading this creative one. Good that someone got some rain. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Bj Legros Kelley

November 9, 2022 at 2:48 AM

We were so blessed by the rain we got over the summer, we'd suffered a horrible long drought that was actually quite terrifying as the dams in the region are drying up. But we were very well watered this summer :) I do hope you get a gentle rain soon Sara, and that those who are being overwhelmed by floods will be blessed with less rain. Thank you for your visit and sweet comment, I always so much appreciate you Sara. I hope all is well for you and yours :) <3

Susan Lawrence

October 3, 2022 at 7:48 AM

So luscious and powerful in its imagery ! Emotions unfurl ! Love it BJ ! Susan :)

Bj Legros Kelley

October 3, 2022 at 8:58 PM

Thank you Susan, the view was indeed spectacular as I wrote this poem. I'm glad I was able to pen part of what I felt as I watched those mighty thunderclouds, it was a beautiful day. :)

Andrea Dietrich

October 1, 2022 at 10:17 AM

fantastic personification!

Bj Legros Kelley

October 3, 2022 at 8:56 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I hope you're having a spectacular beginning to your week, and it all gets better from there! Be blessed my friend :)

Gershon Wolf

September 27, 2022 at 7:14 PM

Interesting! Never thought of mountains 'cowering' before. Quite an angle there, BJ! :)

Bj Legros Kelley

September 28, 2022 at 2:58 PM

Lol, compared to those mountainous thunderheads, they seemed so small, when usually they are so magnificently enormous, I guess that was why they seemed to cower :) It was a beautiful day and I was reminded of what my son once told me on a similar day long ago, "The mountains of clouds dwarf the mountains, it makes me feel so small!" The scene coupled with that memory caused me to grab my pen and ever-present poetry journal :)

Tom Cunningham

September 27, 2022 at 12:05 PM

Love the imagery BJ. With the rain over the valley, a stunning image. Tom

Bj Legros Kelley

September 28, 2022 at 2:50 PM

Thank you, Tom :) I wish I had my camera with me, they say a picture is worth a thousand words, it was so beautiful! I'm glad I was able to convey some of what we saw :)

Victor Buhagiar

September 26, 2022 at 11:27 PM

Your imagery is of great quality.

Bj Legros Kelley

September 28, 2022 at 2:48 PM

I'm glad I was able to convey the picture nature was presenting to us Victor :) I penned this while my husband was driving, and it was a poem in itself, sung by the beauty all around us :)