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Majesty is how the river pours free from gravity the water falls sitting still where carved rocks are quiet listening to the bubbling roars to be cleansed by a vaporous mist that lays upon the soul in silence wonder stirs beneath vibrant sky's kiss where peaceful dreams and I come to merge contest Some form of Crystalline Frederic Parker 10/26/14

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Date: 11/8/2014 10:25:00 AM doubt about it; lovely imagery...excellent write. (We both used the word 'merge' to end our poems!) Congratulations on your podium finish! // paul
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Date: 11/8/2014 4:13:00 AM
Wonderful poem, congrats on the win
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Date: 11/7/2014 1:40:00 AM
so taken by the serenity of this piece, Frederick... thanks for being part of my contest and huge congrats!"
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Date: 11/6/2014 10:54:00 PM
I can visualize the peaceful dreams in this wonerful winning poem Frederic. Big congratulations!
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Date: 11/6/2014 9:48:00 PM
this was just wonderful and truly deserving of its high placement. Congrats to you!!
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Date: 11/6/2014 8:59:00 PM
Your poem lends my senses a euphoric high... Majestic indeed !! Congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:32:00 PM
This is so very good Frederic, just a wonder to read. Congratulations on your well desrved win. Fav
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Date: 11/6/2014 3:18:00 PM
wonderful imagery in this delightful poem Frederic many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/2/2014 6:09:00 AM
Dear Frederic: Nicely done this poem. All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 10/30/2014 9:47:00 PM
I like how you mentioned things outside the waterfall. THis is magical, Frederick. Glad to see your waterfall verse and thanks for your great comments on my recent poetry.
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Date: 10/29/2014 7:00:00 PM
thank you Frederick.. glad i chanced upon this as i am out of the country and borrowing hotel's internet.. huggs
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:38:00 PM
really love how you drew this frederic excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 10/27/2014 8:39:00 AM
Wonderful feelings coming my way while I read this fabulous write Frederic! Gl in contest! Love the third verse the most! Great expressions!
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