Frederic Parker Poet Verse

Majestic

Majesty
is how the river pours
free from gravity the water falls

sitting still
where carved rocks are quiet
listening to the bubbling roars

to be cleansed
by a vaporous mist
that lays upon the soul in silence

wonder stirs
beneath vibrant sky's kiss
where peaceful dreams and I come to merge


contest  Some form of Crystalline
Frederic Parker
10/26/14

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Paul Callus November 8, 2014 at 10:25 AM Majestic...no doubt about it; lovely imagery...excellent write. (We both used the word 'merge' to end our poems!) Congratulations on your podium finish! // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta November 8, 2014 at 4:13 AM Wonderful poem, congrats on the win

Nette Onclaud November 7, 2014 at 1:40 AM so taken by the serenity of this piece, Frederick... thanks for being part of my contest and huge congrats!"

Connie Marcum Wong November 6, 2014 at 10:54 PM I can visualize the peaceful dreams in this wonerful winning poem Frederic. Big congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich November 6, 2014 at 9:48 PM this was just wonderful and truly deserving of its high placement. Congrats to you!!

Debra Squyres November 6, 2014 at 8:59 PM Your poem lends my senses a euphoric high... Majestic indeed !! Congratulations on your win !!

Maurice Yvonne November 6, 2014 at 6:32 PM This is so very good Frederic, just a wonder to read. Congratulations on your well desrved win. Fav

Jan Allison November 6, 2014 at 3:18 PM wonderful imagery in this delightful poem Frederic many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Leon Enriquez November 2, 2014 at 6:09 AM Dear Frederic: Nicely done this poem. All the best then, Leon.

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2014 at 9:47 PM I like how you mentioned things outside the waterfall. THis is magical, Frederick. Glad to see your waterfall verse and thanks for your great comments on my recent poetry.

Nette Onclaud October 29, 2014 at 7:00 PM thank you Frederick.. glad i chanced upon this as i am out of the country and borrowing hotel's internet.. huggs

Liam Mcdaid October 28, 2014 at 7:38 PM really love how you drew this frederic excellent pen dear friend

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 27, 2014 at 8:39 AM Wonderful feelings coming my way while I read this fabulous write Frederic! Gl in contest! Love the third verse the most! Great expressions!