Maiden's Stand

With laden heart her feet now tread
down winding paths filled with dread
avoiding the bruises pebbles shed
upon unworldly maidens head

Sticks hurled may not break bones
nor words spoken from sharpness honed
from magazines her appearance un-cloned
her individuality, resigned, walks alone

Piers, self-proclaimed, never understand
avoiding the touch of unsullied  hands
the tune she hears from her own band
with dignity and honor she stands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
January 7, 2012 at 11:07 PM
Good poetry about the pride that every person should have. I loved it.
Flach Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 3:34 PM
Interesting write Debra - makes me ponder and wonder whether tha Maiden is happy with her stance, marching to the tune of her own band, or lonely in the path she took? She stands with "dignity and honor" yet has a "laden heart" and dreads the winding path she takes. Ah, such is the enigma of life - well captured in you sweet flowing and well-rhymed verse. Nicely done. Joe
Johnson Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 6:50 PM
but is she lonesome understood, by the people sweet n good, keep travelling sweet girl as you should, till happiness abandon... ..:)
Horsman Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 9:26 AM
This is awesome Debra, such profoundness. happy new year, harry
Johnson Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 1:20 PM
Everyone must pick and choose. To be happy or sing the blues. But we both know the pain inside can be a long and lonely ride. So once again, I'll bid you peace. And may your heart know loves increase.
Squyres Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:31 PM
May your heart find increase also my friend. God bless....Love these little snippets of poetry. Hope you are writing them down.
Andresen Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 11:04 AM
Good Debra,like it. OXOXlove Anne-Lise
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