Magnolia: Sweet Tradition

Married under a lavish evergreen canopy,
aromatic blooms filled the evening air.
Grand was our cathedral of open sky.
Newlyweds kissed
on the twenty forth of May (your grandparents' anniversary).
Lying above us on an old lower limb:
initials side by side, theirs and ours,
artistically carved by him and you, many years apart.

Sweet bridal bouquet of magnolias you cut.
When as your grandfather's tradition to your grandmother,
each twenty forth of May, she and I received a bouquet.
Even after his death you carried on for both of us, then to her grave.
That tree bloomed two lifetimes of bouquets, both bitter and sweet.

Then we parted.... Went our separate ways.
Reality sometimes overshadows romanticism,
although true love never dies.
Deep in our hearts the magnolia still blooms.
I missed you as much as you missed me, those eleven years,
till one day the sun stepped up on my porch.
I knew when I looked in your eyes and felt your embrace,
On the twenty forth of may, I'll receive a bouquet.
Never again will we part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/16/2015 8:45:00 PM
to come together again after 11 years. If this is fiction, it's sure a beautiful one, Arlene. It's a pleasure seeing and reading you again.
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Date: 10/15/2015 1:52:00 PM
Such a beautiful acrostic Arlene - so romantic - is it based on a true story I especially enjoyed the final stanza:-) I had a magnolia given to me for my birthday 2 yrs ago but it never flowered( hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/15/2015 2:02:00 PM
WOW what a wonderful love story!!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arlene Smith
Date: 10/15/2015 1:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan!... Yes, I am happy to say it is true!!.. :-) ... Hugs!.....
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